Writing for Children 10-3

Upon reading Cynsations, I came across a post about humor in writing. The blog notes good humor pokes fun at the powerful, not the weak. Using a gift of wit to pummel someone less gifted physically, socially, emotionally, or intellectually may win a few initial laughs. Soon, though, audiences sense the power flexing of a bully behind the humor, and they’ll stop listening. It makes clear that the storyteller is the most powerful and thus is the best target. The post sums up that we should "poke fun" at what we know about, not weak or ones you can't defend themselves. That would come off as bullying, as the blogger notes, and would make the piece overall ineffective.


In Blue Rose Girls, I found the post about being stuck on a story very interesting. The blogger says she had a great idea for a story, a strong beginning and ending, but getting and reading through it was just dreadful. She notes that you do not need to know every aspect of the story in your first draft for it to be successful. She says to know your characters beforehand and know where you want to go with the story but discover the rest as you go, and you will be more satisfied as a writer.

Analyzing my children's book, I cam across some that made the book a strong story for children. There is a clear problem (Best friends are separated as one is picked for the baseball team, and the other is not although he can throw well). Clear conflict (Because of this, the friends aren't the same without each other; the one who didn't get picked is saddened, while the one who is picked can't play well without resolution). And finally, ONE resolution that solves both problems (The friend who wasn't picked is signed as a popcorn vendor in the stadium, thus seeing his friend everyday; the other friend plays better because his friend is able to watch him everyday). There are strong themes such as the power of friendship, while the characters are made into animals and the problem is easy to understand for children while giving a powerful message.